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post 1631744513 02-18-2021, 02:59 PM
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In for more. Subbed as well. Could be a cool channel with your level of knowledge. I like hearing about the heritage and the old ways of doing chit.
post 1631752563 02-18-2021, 04:21 PM
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Speech, cadence, sound level is good.

Just, like you noticed, drop the uhs a little bit, did you prepare an outline for this video or you just went of the top of your head? If you freestyled, then that was really good and you'll kill it with a plan.

Subbed, looking forward to more.
post 1631757743 02-18-2021, 05:23 PM
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That was good man. You can tell just by listening that you really love what you do, it's awesome to hear
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post 1631758003 02-18-2021, 05:27 PM
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just film everything and start putting stuff out

learn to edit along the way

just watch other utubers and figure out the algorithm
post 1631758183 02-18-2021, 05:28 PM
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this whole time i've been wondering what a Hut Rapper is...
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post 1631760313 02-18-2021, 05:56 PM
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Originally Posted By PassiveLearner⏩
this whole time i've been wondering what a Hut Rapper is...
The cold Canuk night is where I'm out looking for beaver

I pull that cleaver out, and doubters turn into believers

My weapons never sheathed, when its time to get between her

One snowed in night,
in huts I might,
succumb to cabin fever
Damn
post 1631791623 02-19-2021, 05:20 AM
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Originally Posted By ramimotemem⏩
Speech, cadence, sound level is good.

Just, like you noticed, drop the uhs a little bit, did you prepare an outline for this video or you just went of the top of your head? If you freestyled, then that was really good and you'll kill it with a plan.

Subbed, looking forward to more.
Zero plan, just turned cam on.

I tried a couple earlier by writing stuff out, but I'll have to memorize it because I learned quick that reading and engaging with a camera is tough.
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post 1631791663 02-19-2021, 05:21 AM
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Originally Posted By Jandels⏩
The cold Canuk night is where I'm out looking for beaver

I pull that cleaver out, and doubters turn into believers

My weapons never sheathed, when its time to get between her

One snowed in night,
in huts I might,
succumb to cabin fever
I'll rap that chit.

Just need a sick beat.
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post 1631791793 02-19-2021, 05:23 AM
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Originally Posted By littlecaesars59⏩
just film everything and start putting stuff out

learn to edit along the way

just watch other utubers and figure out the algorithm
Thnx brah.


And thnx for the honest critique.

It's tough to find an impartial and honest audience for feedback. Family is like:

Awesome! Omg, so good! Amazing! Lol

Misc comes through.

I kind of expected elbows too pointy 2/10 tho, srs
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post 1631791933 02-19-2021, 05:29 AM
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no idea what the fuk you're talking about brah but you handled being on camera well, gjdm.
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post 1631792133 02-19-2021, 05:36 AM
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Do you have an idea what you want your vids to look like in the future.

Like the editing and style?

Are you gna voice over actual footage?
post 1631796593 02-19-2021, 07:26 AM
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Originally Posted By CAP2⏩
Do you have an idea what you want your vids to look like in the future.

Like the editing and style?

Are you gna voice over actual footage?
That's the plan. I'd like to edit them well, take the viewer on a decent variety of adventures, and still cover some degree of how to stuff, without turning the videos into tutorials.

But am happy if my ideas of how they should turn out change based on what works.
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post 1631797833 02-19-2021, 07:46 AM
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Originally Posted By Hutrapper⏩
Zero plan, just turned cam on.

I tried a couple earlier by writing stuff out, but I'll have to memorize it because I learned quick that reading and engaging with a camera is tough.
Hm memorizing might make it sound less natural though, I meant more of a general subject guideline and specific details you want to talk about, with the rest being on the spot.

That was really good for no plan and first time on camera though.
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I don't have a youtube account but I'll bookmark your channel bro and watch your vids seem interesting srs.
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post 1631799223 02-19-2021, 08:10 AM
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Originally Posted By ramimotemem⏩
Hm memorizing might make it sound less natural though, I meant more of a general subject guideline and specific details you want to talk about, with the rest being on the spot.

That was really good for no plan and first time on camera though.
Maybe bullet point the main points as reminders, then go for it?
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post 1631799243 02-19-2021, 08:11 AM
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Originally Posted By Muscle2021⏩
I don't have a youtube account but I'll bookmark your channel bro and watch your vids seem interesting srs.
And im just a suburbancel
Awesome man. Its just so cool out there and so much to know/learn. Id take everyone out in person if I could!
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post 1631799903 02-19-2021, 08:23 AM
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Originally Posted By Hutrapper⏩
Maybe bullet point the main points as reminders, then go for it?
Ya, but maybe memorize the bullet points so it doesn't look like you're reading on screen you know? Or try to place them in a way that doesn't look like you're reading on screen.
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Originally Posted By ramimotemem⏩
Ya, but maybe memorize the bullet points so it doesn't look like you're reading on screen you know? Or try to place them in a way that doesn't look like you're reading on screen.
Reading of any kind is impossible. Your eyes dart back and forth and it looks like chit.

Memorizing just the points might be key
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post 1631800113 02-19-2021, 08:27 AM
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Not bad but I hope your channel won't be you talking in the caf every video
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Originally Posted By Hutrapper⏩
Reading of any kind is impossible. Your eyes dart back and forth and it looks like chit.

Memorizing just the points might be key
Yep memorizing the bullet points would be key.

But there are ways around it, by putting your camera in front of the writing. If you're sitting outdoors and it's sunny, you can wear sunglasses and people won't see your eyes move. Or if you are staying indoors in one spot, you can put a big white board with the bullet point written largely so you can read them with your peripheral vision.
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Originally Posted By ramimotemem⏩
Yep memorizing the bullet points would be key.

But there are ways around it, by putting your camera in front of the writing. If you're sitting outdoors and it's sunny, you can wear sunglasses and people won't see your eyes move. Or if you are staying indoors in one spot, you can put a big white board with the bullet point written largely so you can read them with your peripheral vision.
10/10 ideas. On spread as usual.


Just talked with my BIL. he is in Ottawa and is going to buy a relatively inexpensive gaming desktop for me used, and then build it into something that will work good for me for editing.

He's a huge gamer/techie. If all goes well ill have editing stuff in place in a few weeks.

i am getting a big white board, as i find sometimes explaining ideas by drawing them as a mini segment is a good way to get across ideas. For example, downrigging for lake trout and other fish. Its really easy to do a quick sketch on a board to show how it works. Or setting nets under the ice like the natives do. So much easier to do a one minute explanation using a white board.

A good way to get certain ideas across.
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post 1631801133 02-19-2021, 08:40 AM
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Originally Posted By azzspankr⏩
Not bad but I hope your channel won't be you talking in the caf every video
no, that was just to critique how I speak on cam.
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I kind of enjoyed the drive aspect, however like others have mentioned there are things you can do to help your delivery although I do think this is a genuinely good start.

I don’t think,memorizationis what you want to go for, but rather speaking from a place of knowledge. The best oral arguments in law don’t come from wrote memorization, but being intimately familiar with the case and being able to pull that knowledge fluidly.

You obviously know what you’re talking about, so I really think its about just having an outline of what your topics are, the main points of each topic, and then letting your knowledge fill in the juicy details that come from your years of experience. In other words, its just about the delivery and how you convey it.

I think the advice to look at other you tubers who do similar videos is really good, I’m not a trial guy but before taking calls or meetings that I know will be contentious I like to watch old F. Lee Bailey videos from the OJ trial and pay attention to his delivery, how he pauses, his cadence, his body language and how he uses all of that during cross examinations.

EDIT: the best thing you can do like comedians, actors, etc. is to record yourself and watch it back to find out what you want to change, even though it can be painful lol.
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Originally Posted By Hutrapper⏩
no, that was just to critique how I speak on cam.
Don't overthink this. You speak fine. If you put out quality content that people enjoy they won't ditch your channel because of the way you talk.
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Originally Posted By CremeFraicheBro⏩
I kind of enjoyed the drive aspect, however like others have mentioned there are things you can do to help your delivery although I do think this is a genuinely good start.

I don’t think,memorizationis what you want to go for, but rather speaking from a place of knowledge. The best oral arguments in law don’t come from wrote memorization, but being intimately familiar with the case and being able to pull that knowledge fluidly.

You obviously know what you’re talking about, so I really think its about just having an outline of what your topics are, the main points of each topic, and then letting your knowledge fill in the juicy details that come from your years of experience. In other words, its just about the delivery and how you convey it.

I think the advice to look at other you tubers who do similar videos is really good, I’m not a trial guy but before taking calls or meetings that I know will be contentious I like to watch old F. Lee Bailey videos from the OJ trial and pay attention to his delivery, how he pauses, his cadence, his body language and how he uses all of that during cross examinations.

EDIT: the best thing you can do like comedians, actors, etc. is to record yourself and watch it back to find out what you want to change, even though it can be painful lol.
Awesome reply, thanks for taking the time to do that.

i think putting it all together will happen.

My issue is that when explaining things I am very reactive. As a contractor I lead conference calls with architects, designers, and property owners all the time, and these calls can be two and three hours long.

I have no issue explaining based on someones reaction, or answering questions, but just talking to myself just feels odd.

Good points above to work on.
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Originally Posted By Hutrapper⏩
10/10 ideas. On spread as usual.


Just talked with my BIL. he is in Ottawa and is going to buy a relatively inexpensive gaming desktop for me used, and then build it into something that will work good for me for editing.

He's a huge gamer/techie. If all goes well ill have editing stuff in place in a few weeks.

i am getting a big white board, as i find sometimes explaining ideas by drawing them as a mini segment is a good way to get across ideas. For example, downrigging for lake trout and other fish. Its really easy to do a quick sketch on a board to show how it works. Or setting nets under the ice like the natives do. So much easier to do a one minute explanation using a white board.

A good way to get certain ideas across.
Nice on the computer! If you ever need maps (free of charge) made holla at me hehe.

And yeah a white board would be sick. You could explain with ease trap lines from a bird's eye view, how some animals move from one patch of trees to another for cover, comparing the size of different animal tracks, etc. Plenty of material to share brah.
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Originally Posted By Hutrapper⏩
Awesome reply, thanks for taking the time to do that.

i think putting it all together will happen.

My issue is that when explaining things I am very reactive. As a contractor I lead conference calls with architects, designers, and property owners all the time, and these calls can be two and three hours long.

I have no issue explaining based on someones reaction, or answering questions, but just talking to myself just feels odd.

Good points above to work on.
TY brah. I can understand the issue of reacting and answering questions vs just going off what you have to say, but it just goes to show you definitely have the knowledge but your focus can probably be narrowed down to delivering it as a cohesive and narrative story, rather than in smaller bits and in response to questions if I’m on the right track.

In any event good luck and I think all of us here will look forward to more footage!
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Originally Posted By ramimotemem⏩
Nice on the computer! If you ever need maps (free of charge) made holla at me hehe.

And yeah a white board would be sick. You could explain with ease trap lines from a bird's eye view, how some animals move from one patch of trees to another for cover, comparing the size of different animal tracks, etc. Plenty of material to share brah.
Maps? What kind of maps you make?
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Originally Posted By Toker095⏩
Hope your peppering your Angus op

The Norwood reaper's comin to getcha
Based on my Opa and Grandfather, it is truly unavoidable.

But my father is almost 70 and his hairline just stopped right where mine did.

And mine has been about the same forever.

Peppering just in case.
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