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post 1631740823 02-18-2021, 02:18 PM
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Critique my first video.

Was driving to town today and took the opportunity to try and get used to speaking on camera. Am starting a youtube channel eventually, hunting, trapping, fishing, winter camping, etc. and would prefer to do a better job of it rather than a chit one.


I hate it, but you have to start somewhere. its pretty boring, but I needed to talk about something...Oh, and hair shops are closed, so I grabbed some scissors and clippers and cut my own hair last night...

First ever video, let me have it *******s. Criticism welcome. About 6 mins long.


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post 1631741003 02-18-2021, 02:20 PM
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didn't watch, but why are you trying to become accustomed to talking on video?
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post 1631741103 02-18-2021, 02:21 PM
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Originally Posted By Jacobcapra⏩
didn't watch, but why are you trying to become accustomed to talking on video?
Sorry, I am starting a youtube channel eventually. Hunting, trapping and fishing adventures. Winter camping, etc. A miscer suggested posting something for critique, so here is six mins of me just talking...

I will edit the post.
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post 1631741283 02-18-2021, 02:23 PM
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trappers barely break even? SAD.


Why film this while driving? Are you too nervous to just sit in front of a camera and film? Lose the shades, as well.
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post 1631741393 02-18-2021, 02:24 PM
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Your diction is fine. I wouldn't worry about it.

Is the steering wheel on the right on that car or is it just some camera angle trickery?

Also gjdm on the self haircut. I'm looking like a damn hobo these days but don't have the gnads to try cutting it myself as I'm sure I'd absolutely butcher it.
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Originally Posted By PassiveLearner⏩
trappers barely break even? SAD.
Fur prices are just down right now. When they go up, the money is there.

Have been many ups and down in history.
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post 1631741553 02-18-2021, 02:25 PM
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Pretty darn good for a first video brah. Not much dead time which is what people usually struggle with. Try to cut down your ‘uhh’ unless you’re trying to copy our beloved prime minister.

Gj w/ home haircut too

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post 1631741583 02-18-2021, 02:25 PM
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Remember that you can ramble and pause as much as you want - you should be removing those during editing, so that the final video appears as a single cohesive stream of thoughts. Even if it wasn't when filming.

There are apps you can get on your phone that automatically filter out long pauses and whatnot, splicing together sections of the video in which you're actually talking.
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post 1631741593 02-18-2021, 02:25 PM
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Originally Posted By JoeDelts⏩
Your diction is fine. I wouldn't worry about it.

Is the steering wheel on the right on that car or is it just some camera angle trickery?

Also gjdm on the self haircut. I'm looking like a damn hobo these days but don't have the gnads to try cutting it myself as I'm sure I'd absolutely butcher it.
My wife had to fix the back a bit lol.

And for some reason the camera mirrors everything. Not on that european time.
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post 1631741603 02-18-2021, 02:26 PM
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Originally Posted By DimTriad⏩
Pretty darn good for a first video brah. Not much dead time which is what people usually struggle with. Try to cut down your ‘uhh’ unless you’re trying to copy our beloved prime minister.

Gj w/ home haircut too
temped to neg for comparing me to Trudeau lmao.

Thnx for the tips, repped.

I could also turn the uhhs and ahhs into a drinking game. Drink when I fuk up. yall will be hammed by the three min mark lol
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Don't say things like "it's difficult to explain, you have to experience it" then try to explain...

Make a video of the trapping and film in detail when you skin your prey and how you aroused it makes you as you snuff the life out of a weaker, lesser being and perhaps start wearing some of your kills IN the videos where you skin a bear and wear its face while you slaughter beavers with blood sweat tears

people will like this. the average person is let's face it sitting around watching video games not interested in the outdoors that they once did - get back to nature. Nasty, blood natuure.

Also talk more about how the nation was founded on beaver because that's just fukin hot
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post 1631741793 02-18-2021, 02:27 PM
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post 1631741853 02-18-2021, 02:28 PM
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Originally Posted By PassiveLearner⏩
Don't say things like "it's difficult to explain, you have to experience it" then try to explain...

Make a video of the trapping and film in detail when you skin your prey and how you aroused it makes you as you snuff the life out of a weaker, lesser being and perhaps start wearing some of your kills IN the videos where you skin a bear and wear its face while you slaughter beavers with blood sweat tears

people will like this. the average person is let's face it sitting around watching video games not interested in the outdoors that they once did - get back to nature. Nasty, blood natuure.

Also talk more about how the nation was founded on beaver because that's just fukin hot
lold

Just trying to get comfortable with the camera.

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Originally Posted By Hutrapper⏩
lold

Just trying to get comfortable with the camera.

Thnx.
in all seriousness, keep it up. take us on some outdoor adventures. be brave.
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Originally Posted By Hutrapper⏩
temped to neg for comparing me to Trudeau lmao.

Thnx for the tips, repped.

I could also turn the uhhs and ahhs into a drinking game. Drink when I fuk up. yall will be hammed by the three min mark lol
Haha in fairness you’re like 1/10th as bad as he is. Should pretty easy for you to eliminate in short order
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Originally Posted By Jacobcapra⏩
Remember that you can ramble and pause as much as you want - you should be removing those during editing, so that the final video appears as a single cohesive stream of thoughts. Even if it wasn't when filming.

There are apps you can get on your phone that automatically filter out long pauses and whatnot, splicing together sections of the video in which you're actually talking.
I heard of those apps. They cut in when you start up again. I wonder if they will work with a gopro too?

I dont plan on just talking vids, that seems boring, but rather actual videos of course.

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Originally Posted By PassiveLearner⏩
in all seriousness, keep it up. take us on some outdoor adventures. be brave.
thnx. In time, it will happen. I am my biggest critic, so editing will kill me lol. In a few months should have something ready. I need to buy a fukkin editing computer. That aint cheap.
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Originally Posted By Ratfish⏩
wood watch if you were getting rinsed instead
You drink, I'll film.

Never had a drink, srs.
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Originally Posted By DimTriad⏩
Haha in fairness you’re like 1/10th as bad as he is. Should pretty easy for you to eliminate in short order
My wife throws things at the screen when he comes on. Its pretty funny.
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Originally Posted By Hutrapper⏩
thnx. In time, it will happen. I am my biggest critic, so editing will kill me lol. In a few months should have something ready. I need to buy a fukkin editing computer. That aint cheap.
Perfection is the enemy of performance. Just make and post videos. If they're crappy, they're still good practice. Don't be afraid we'll hold you bro
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You sound Canadian.
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Originally Posted By PassiveLearner⏩
Perfection is the enemy of performance. Just make and post videos. If they're crappy, they're still good practice. Don't be afraid we'll hold you bro
I watched some famous youtubers and you are bang on. Their videos started from pretty humble beginnings.

I know misc wont let me down.
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Originally Posted By PassiveLearner⏩
Repped for gumption.
Thnks brah. I been comfortable for too long.

Time once again to jump firmly out of the comfort zone.

Opening yourself up to the public is daunting at first.
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Ill check later. heading out on the snowmobile now.

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i enjoyed it brah and definitely in for more vids
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