I noticed when women write a story about something that never happened to them it comes across unbelievable. Idk what it is that gives authors that ability to draw you into a story and be able to imagine it happening but a lot stories I read by women dont have that in their stories. When I broke up with my gf she made fake rape stories and wrote a long story on this blog and someone sent the link to me that saw her posting it on her fb account. The story she wrote is terribly bad. She said I strangled her and she passed out and when she woke up I strangled her again and did that over and over. I've never strangled anybody but I am pretty sure that it usually kills you and when you watch UFC fights its the side of the neck being squeezed that makes you pass out, not cutting off air and stopping you from breathing. And it had a bunch of dangling modifiers and things, the story she wrote just sucked and was unbelievable.

Another example would be today I came across this woman telling a story about how she dealt with pushy sales people. About halfway through her story I am thinking to myself "none of this happened" its just not believable.
Here's the salesperson story.
https://qr.ae/pNBPG3

Why cant women write good fake stories that are believable?