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post 1667752373 09-12-2022, 02:04 PM
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Writing a country song, let me know what you think (dead fkn srs)

Title: If I could Send a Text to Heaven
Written by: Me (2022)
Label: TBA (once I sign record deal, I will post)

Depending on the feedback I get here, I am ready to pack up and head to Nashville to look for a record deal. Ready to risk it all boyos.

LYRICS

If I could send a text to heaavunnn, I'd talk to ma uncle Kehhvunnn. Talk about all the good years...that we had.

There's so much I wanna say, it gets harder everyday. Been a few years since I seen your facee...shed a few tears, I wish lord had cell phones...IN THAT PPLAAACE

I wish things were different, and I wasn't stuck down here by myself. But I guess that's just the way things...gotta be.

And that's the Corus and first couple verses.

I think I have something here, a good concept. Misc will probably hate as usual. Remember me when Im blowing up next year and on tour smashing your wives.
post 1667752393 09-12-2022, 02:04 PM
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post 1667752713 09-12-2022, 02:09 PM
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OP, in what key will the song be?

OP, what is the song's time signature?

OP, are you down with cuuuunnntry?

OP, yeah, you know me.







OPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP, the song doesn't mention anything at all about mama or trains, or trucks, or prison, or getting' drunk.

Sit down and rewrite another verse to the song and send it to the MISK.
post 1667752953 09-12-2022, 02:14 PM
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Originally Posted By hendrixfreak70⏩
OP, in what key will the song be?

OP, what is the song's time signature?

OP, are you down with cuuuunnntry?

OP, yeah, you know me.




OPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP, the song doesn't mention anything at all about mama or trains, or trucks, or prison, or getting' drunk.

Sit down and rewrite another verse to the song and send it to the MISK.
Working on another verse as we speak. The rest is TBA. Heading downtown to buy an acoustic guitar soon. Idk how to play, but I will just strum/smash it in whatever sad country sounding tune I can manage.
post 1667753053 09-12-2022, 02:15 PM
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My wife left me
My dog run away
My truck does not work
I'm drinking a Tennessee whiskey
post 1667753193 09-12-2022, 02:17 PM
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Originally Posted By Sinan09400⏩
My wife left me
My dog run away
My truck does not work
I'm drinking a Tennessee whiskey
A verse about my dog, Beven (RIP in Peace), would be a good idea too. Thanks.
post 1667753203 09-12-2022, 02:17 PM
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Uncle Kevin would leave you on read for writing this garbage out and then actually hitting "post."
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post 1667753213 09-12-2022, 02:18 PM
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Originally Posted By ez92⏩
Working on another verse as we speak. The rest is TBA. Heading downtown to buy an acoustic guitar soon. Idk how to play, but I will juststrum/smash it in whatever sad country sounding tune I can manage.
That is the best way and the way most do it. Keep putting out bangers, man.
post 1667753293 09-12-2022, 02:20 PM
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Originally Posted By ez92⏩
A verse about my dog, Beven (RIP in Peace), would be a good idea too. Thanks.
May I help you? I'd really like to help. The best word to rhyme here with Beven is heathen. A heathen is someone far way from God. Here's the rhyme.

My poor dog Beven, passed away into another world, just as he lived, he dead a heathen.



See? Perfect.
post 1667753313 09-12-2022, 02:20 PM
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I know I need to work in something about cold beer in as well, also something about "a boy like me/a girl like you" is another essential, but that maybe should be for the country love song I'm working on.

Also trucks, back roads, and the good old boys from high school in my small town are other things to potentially include.

Gonna make it boyos.
post 1667753413 09-12-2022, 02:21 PM
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Originally Posted By ez92⏩
I know I need to work in something about cold beer in as well, also something about "a boy like me/a girl like you" is another essential, but that maybe should be for the country love song I'm working on.

Also trucks, back roads, and the good old boys from high school in my small town are other things to potentially include.

Gonna make it boyos.
Ish is already lit fr fr no cap on god.
post 1667753463 09-12-2022, 02:22 PM
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Originally Posted By hendrixfreak70⏩
May I help you? I'd really like to help. The best word to rhyme here with Beven is heathen. A heathen is someone far way from God. Here's the rhyme.

My poor dog Beven, passed away into another world, just as he lived, he dead a heathen.



See? Perfect.
Beven was, Infact, a little old heathen. That's good I will rework something for later. Thanks for the guidance.
post 1667753683 09-12-2022, 02:26 PM
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Originally Posted By 78novacaine⏩
Uncle Kevin would leave you on read for writing this garbage out and then actually hitting "post."
He did leave me on read the last time I texted him, actually.

Brb

"You left me on read, and now you're dead, there are so many things I wish weren't left unsaid".

😢
post 1667753723 09-12-2022, 02:27 PM
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Truck, Small town, gurrrl , TRUUUUCKKK, TIRESSS, TRUCKKK BEER BEER BEER , CHEVY, CHEVY.

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post 1667755393 09-12-2022, 02:56 PM
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Posts three lines.

Claims the chorus and a couple of versus are done.

You use the word 'song', but I don't think you know what it means.
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Originally Posted By bananastand11⏩
Posts three lines.

Claims the chorus and a couple of versus are done.

You use the word 'song', but I don't think you know what it means.
Listen, SIR, Rome wasn't built in a day. OP is out here, bustin' his tail to entertain you, and you're sitting there all ungrateful and critical.


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Just trying to get it right (A little patience, yeah)
post 1667756513 09-12-2022, 03:20 PM
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I love it. Take any and every thing and go from there.
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post 1667763583 09-12-2022, 05:50 PM
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I love it. Take any and every thing and go from there.
Thanks friend. I'll remember your kind words when I'm blowing up. Headin' on down to music city asap.
post 1667765003 09-12-2022, 06:17 PM
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Vocaroo so we can hear your singing voice
Damn
post 1667766853 09-12-2022, 06:50 PM
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Originally Posted By bananastand11⏩
Posts three lines.

Claims the chorus and a couple of versus are done.

You use the word 'song', but I don't think you know what it means.
Well?!...what do you think of the 3 lines bitch?
post 1667770523 09-12-2022, 08:07 PM
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OP if you don't upload your song onto misc by next year we will run a neg train on you. ded. fckn. srs. u hear me m8? ded. fkcn. srs.
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I sang it better than you ever could OP

Damn
post 1667771823 09-12-2022, 08:38 PM
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You can offer me a diamond-plated pearl.
You can send me all the riches in the world.
You can tempt me with the palaces of kings.
I'd give 'em back in a big ol' sack and keep The Simple Things.

I've got The Simple Things; I've got the rain in spring,
Got spicy chicken wings, and French-fried onion rings.

You can line me up a mile of limousines.
For me it don't add up to a hill o' beans.
I got no hankerin' for grabbin' your brass ring.
It's crystal clear I'll stay right here and keep The Simple Things.

I've got the summer breeze, got sixteen cans of peas.
A two-speed window fan when it's ninety-three degrees.
So forgive me for not grabbin' your brass ring.
It's crystal clear I'll stay right here and keep The Simple Things.
It's crystal clear I'll stay right here and keep The Simple Things.
post 1667772233 09-12-2022, 08:45 PM
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lol
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Originally Posted By Jandels⏩
I sang it better than you ever could OP

You have given out too much Reputation in the last 24 hours, try again later.
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Already been done:

Don't put that on me Ricky Bobby, don't you ever put that on me.
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